The poems that I
have documented for this category 
include
The Faceted Diamond         (three in one - formatted)   - This page
The Trigee and theCleave  (three in one)  
Amera's Style                        (2 in one - See Trick Poetry)
Trick Poetry                           (four in one - OR
many more)
- Faceted
     Diamond is a verse form that is probably as complicated to
     read as to write. It is an invented form found at Poetry Base and was
     invented by American poet Cory S Sylvester. Like the
     Cleave and the Trigee there are 3 poems in 1 but unlike the others, the
     reader may need clues to understand how to read the 3.
 The Faceted Diamond is:
- 3 poems in 15 lines.
- syllabic, 1-2-3-4-5-6--7-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1. The even # lines break half way. (Poetry Base suggests the poem could be longer as long as it is an odd number of lines, but I am not going there. You can check with PB if you are curious.)
- unrhymed.
- centered on the
      page.
 x
 x -- x
 x x x
 x x -- x x
 x x x x x
 x x x -- x x x
 x x x x x x x
 x x x x -- x x x x
 x x x x x x x
 x x x -- x x x
 x x x x x
 x x -- x x
 x x x
 x -- x
 x
- The poem can be read in whole and...
- A second poem can be read by reading the odd numbered lines and the first half of the even numbered lines and ....
- A third poem can be read by reading the odd numbered lines and the second half of the even numbered lines. All 3 poems should make sense.
My Thanks to Judi Van Gorder of PoetryMagnumOpus for the above.
Example Poem
Only I     (Faceted Diamond)
Wait 
my dear 
lovely one 
can you pause and 
observe men that
stare 
openly without shame
wishing it were
they, not me 
tending to you,
taking you home, 
and ending the
evening 
in your arms,
kissing you. 
and all of the time 
I know they know 
they can't have 
my dream 
love. 
© Lawrencealot -
September 23, 2013
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