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Saturday, December 29, 2012

YaDu


S.E.Asia. (Burma)
Ya Du


The yadu is a Burmese climbing-rhyme verse. Each of the stanzas —up to three in all— has 5 lines. The first four lines have 4 syllables each, and the last one can have 5, 7, 9, or 11 syllables. The last two lines rhyme in the usual way. The climbing rhymes occur in syllables four, three, and two of both the first three lines and the last three lines of a stanza. There should be a reference to the seasons since the word yadu means "the seasons.


As the Than Bauk is to the Haiku, then the Ya Du is to the Tanka 
and consists of four syllable lines and a fifth one that can 
comprise of 5, 7, 9,or 11 syllables. 

The staircase rule applies to the four lines, 
and the last syllable of the fourth and fifth 
line must rhyme, giving a pattern of:


O. O. O. a.
O. O. a. O
O. a. O. b
O. O. b. c.
O. O. O. O. O. O. O. O. c.

Example Poem

Blue sky’s curved moon
appeared at noon, as
gray loon’s song note
surged afloat clouds --
bird’s songs circled dreams, quietly abound.

We watched it stay
on its way, silk
breaths swayed tree leaves;
freshly weaved thoughts
seized summer notions the afternoon moon brought.

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Ya Hoo


The Ya Hoo is an enhanced version of the Yadu, which is defined HERE.
It was invented by Lawrencelot of AP


There are 1 to 3 stanzas, each with five lines.
Each of the first four lines have four syllables.
The last line has either 5, 7, 9 or 11 syllables.

The defining feature of this form is that it has internal staircase rhyme, as does the yadu, but unlike the yadu it has right and left staircases.

Also unlike the yadu, there is NO requirement that the poem have a theme about seasons.

Here is a syllable schematic of the rhyme required.

a.O.O.b
O.a.b.c
d.b.a.e
O.d.e.c
O.e.d--.c
Where "--" equals from 1 to 7 syllables


Example poem.

Maybe Time, by Lawrencealot

Shine a dim light 
of fine nightowl 
sky;  white wine pour 
for my poor gal. 
She's sore. Why? I dunno but I see a scowl. 

I could propose 
then I 'spose she 
would close my night 
out good, right? We 
don't fight. Should work for everybody.

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