The
Trijan Refrain, created by Jan Turner, consists of three 9-line
stanzas, for a total of 27 lines.
Line
1 is the same in all three stanzas,
although
a variation of the form is not to repeat the same line
at
the beginning of each stanza.
In
other words, the beginning line of each stanza can be different.
The
first four syllables of line 5 in each stanza are repeated as the
double-refrain
for lines 7 and 8. The Trijan Refrain is a rhyming poem
with
a set meter and rhyme scheme as follows:
Rhyme
scheme: ababccddc
Meter: 8/6/8/6/8/8/4/4/8
source:
shadowpoetry.com
note:
on the template below I have colored line 1,
Indicated
that in the formal poem it should be first line of each verse.
in the poem below, I followed formal protocol for the first complete Trijan Refrain, then lapsed to the ever more poplular technique of not requiring first line stanza repetion.
Example
Poem
Crop
Circles
Crop Circles are
works to amaze.
Sources of awe and
hate!
For two score plus,
a world-wide craze
to shock and
aggravate.
It aggravates the
farmers who
lose cash when
fields are trampled through.
It aggravates.
It aggravates,
but there's not much
that they can do.
Crop Circles are
works to amaze
from ancient times
'til now.
A marvel upon which
to gaze,
made in the night
somehow.
They were simple in
early days.
Mere circles. shown
in diff'rent ways.
They were simple,
They were simple.
Complex now, harder
to appraise.
Crop Circles are
works to amaze
across our planet
earth.
Hoaxers we know have
made displays
Art forms of
splendid girth.
Not all are false;
most have proved true.
Could not be made by
me or you.
Not all are false,
Not all are false.
Messages require a
global view.
Crop formations they
are now called.
Using geometry.
Mathematics leave us
enthralled
with their
complexity,
Math is the same in
every land.
Greek, Chinese, Arab
understand.
Math is the same.
Math is the same.
So global message
must be planned.
Crop formations they
are now named,
choose pre-historic
sites
like Stonehenge and
others so famed
to inscribe their
delights.
Unsolved myst'ries
believed to be
formed by some
intelligentry.
Unsolved myst'ries,
Unsolved myst'ries
clues now
distributed widely.
Since I began this
poem to write.
This three-D box was
made.
Of course it sprang
up overnight.
It doesn't look
homemade.
It baffles me what
it might mean
laid out so nicely
on the green.
It baffles me,
It baffles me.
If it's a hoax that
will be seen.
The Mormons have not
staked a claim,
nor have the Jews, I
think.
Christians,
Buddhists don't seek acclaim,
some odd cults may,
don't blink.
We don't know how
just over night
Huge shapes appear,
proportions right.
We don't know how,
We don't know how.
Energy remains at
each site.
Mayan themes have
been oft addressed.
Celestial cycle lore
hints that earth
shall soon be distressed
by changed magnetic
core.
We can have help as
ancients did,
in building the
great pyramid
We can have help,
We can have help.
It could be; that
would be splendid.
(c) Lawrencealot -
July 6, 2012
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