The
form name “Triquatrain” was most likely contrived by Robert L. Huntsman as
found listed on shadowpoetry.com. However he most likely stole the
credit by giving a name to simple didactic verse.
This
is obvious because “Jack and Jill” was written in the 1760s.
There
is also reference to it in William Shakespeare's A Midsummer Night's
Dream at the end of act three: “Jack shall have Jill; Nought shall go
ill.” (Just a little history there)
It
is a quatrain poem in tri-rhyme with a specific rhyming pattern (see
below).
Lines
1 and 3 have internal rhyme whereas lines 2 and 4 do not.
Rhyme
Pattern:
(a,a)
b
(c,c)
b
(d,d)
e
(f,f)
e
(g,g)
h
(i,i)
h
Example Poem:
Fred Meets Trixie
Now Fred was nice;
he worked in vice
and could not be
corrupt.
Take the money, have
a honey.
He made them all
shut-up.
He closed down rooms
that reeked of fumes,
that turned out to
be meth.
He smashed their
tools, then told the fools,
"Wages of sin
are death."
Prostitution?
His solution:
Arrest each whore
and John.
So straight he
played, that I'm afraid.
Some councilmen are
gone.
Some lovely chicks
had turned some dicks,
(Detectives),
I should say.
But, no cutie or
real beauty
Could cause our Fred
to sway.
Business was down
all over town,
confession booths
were slow.
The internet was
busy yet
it brought no local
dough.
Then just by chance
one day Fred glanced
across the cafe
floor.
As Trixie came (the
perfect dame)
right through the
joint's front door.
Passions promised in
some fashion
many times thru the
years,
It seems
absurd without a word
said, she had
meshed his gears!
After they talked,
together walked,
She put him to the
test.
"Play on my
range," she said," for change
is as good as
arrest."
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