Rhupunt is
one of the 24 traditional Welsh forms and has a scheme of aab ccb ddb etc. or
aaab cccb dddb etc., or aaaab ccccb ddddb etc. Alternatively, each stanza can
be a single line (but this prayer is so short I chose the former layout). It is
described here:
My
poem above uses Cynghanedd Sain (sonorous or chiming consonance), that is,
treating each stanza as a single line: this involves three elements, the first
two rimed (end-words of L1 and L2 in each stanza above), and the 3rd (2nd word
of L3 in each stanza above) repeating the consonants of the 2nd. Cynghanedd
Sain is described here:
http://allpoetry.com/column/2348659 (scroll
2/3 to ¾ of the way down)
A
four syllable line each stanza can be of three, four or five lines
a..a..a..B.
The
next stanza rhymes the similar c..c..c..B.The rhyme could change for the
next
stanzas.
We end up with a pattern thus:
x
x x a
x
x x a
x
x x a
x
x x B
x
x x c
x
x x c
x
x x c
x
x x B
I
have used but three lines in the example below.
My poem
above uses Cynghanedd Sain (sonorous or chiming consonance),
which
links the last syllable of L2 to the 2nd Syllable of L3.
that
calls for consonant rhyme, but in the last line I stepped it up to full rhyme,
not
knowing if this might be forbidden. (It fit too well to ignore.)
Example
Poem
Put on a smile
act all the while
the whole is swell.
Ignore all guile
and evil while
fears will disspell.
Will is our own.
You have here grown
won't groan in hell.
