The
RemyLa Rhyme Form, a form created by Laura Lamarca, consists of 4
stanzas.
Stanzaic: Each
stanza has four lines.
Syllabic: 8/10/12/8
Rhymed: abcA defD ghiG jklj
The
first word of stanza 1 must also be the last word of stanza 4.
Stanzas 1 throught 4 must begin with the last word of the previous stanza.
I
noticed everyone used alliteration and internal rhyme??
J1,
x, x, x, x, x, x, a
x,
x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, b
x,
x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, c
x,
x, x, x, x, x, x, x, A1
A1,
x, x, x, x, x, x, d
x,
x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, e
x,
x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, f
x,
x, x, x, x, x , x, D1
D1,
x, x, x, x, x, x, g
x,
x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, h
x,
x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, i
x,
x, x, x, x, x, x, G1
G1,
x, x, x, x, x, x, j
x,
x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, k
x,
x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, x, l
x,
x, x, x, x, x, x, J
Example
Poem
Cant
Kick
Pants hanging around
our butt-crack
We met, said
"Howdy", got a bit rowdy
We'd rather play
street ball, bounding and bouncing here
than go to the gym
or the track.
Track my progress
and you will find
I'm a kicker- and no
one is quicker.
I simply own this
ball game when played on this block.
I'm double-teamed
and I don't mind.
Mind you that's in
this neighborhood.
Today we we're
aiming at taming foes
that kick a wicked
ball in Homer's home ground.
There's never been a
doubt they're good.
Good enough to stand
a real chance.
With me doubled and
tripled we did lose.
A loss costs the
losers a high-wire pair of shoes.
Next time it could
cost me my pants.
(Lawrencealot - June
22, 2012
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