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Friday, March 29, 2013

Aquarian


This is an Aquarian
Invented by A. Maris Mazz
Each stanza  has lines of 2-4-6-2 syllables
Any number of stanzas permitted.
Unrhymed.


Example Poem

A Long One Does Too

A short 
Aquarian 
has fourteen syllables. 
No more.

(c) Lawrencealot - Oct 10,2012



Monday, March 18, 2013

Clerihew


clerihew is a whimsical, four-line biographical poem invented by Edmund Clerihew Bentley, at age 16.

A clerihew has the following properties:
  • It is biographical and usually whimsical, showing the subject from an unusual point of view; it pokes fun at mostly famous people
  • It has four lines of irregular length and metre (for comic effect)
  • The rhyme structure is AABB; the subject matter and wording are often humorously contrived in order to achieve a rhyme, including the use of phrases in Latin, French and other non-English Languages[2]
  • The first line contains, and may consist solely of, the subject's name.
Clerihews are not satirical or abusive, but they target famous individuals and reposition them in an absurd, anachronistic or commonplace setting, often giving them an over-simplified and slightly garbled description (similar to the schoolboy style of 1066 and All That)
The unbalanced and unpolished poetic meter and line length parody the limerick, and the clerihew in form also parodies the eulogy.



Note:  I have found that many what have been presented as Clerihew  have not been
rigorous about the first line name-rhyming.  Indeed I have not.  I have also tended
to use a fixed meter.  They can be fun, but we must remind ourselves they are not
formally Clerihew and should be labeled accordingly when attempting a rigorous interpretation.


Example Poems

Bruce  (Clerihew)

Bruce Willis continues alive, 
Now showing Die Hard number five. 
I'm a Bruce Willis junky, sure. 
He is my Schwarzenegger cure. 

Arnie    (Clerihew)

If Schwarzenegger tries once more 
his movie ceiling's near the floor. 
A machine using Arnie's voice 
looks to be a desparate choice. 

© Lawrencealot - October 21, 2012


Visual Template
Note:  there can be no definitive template for this form for meter and
line length are irregular.  This is merely one example.

Thursday, March 7, 2013

Dodoitsu


Dodoistu is a Japanese form of poetry that is sometimes performed as a folk song. The Dodoitsu comes from the old agricultural roots of the Gombei, the people of Japan's back-country. The majority of Dodoistu poetry was handed down through oral tradition and was performed to the accompaniment of shamisen, a three- stringed instrument.

 A lot of Dodoistu poetry focuses on love, humor or the unexpected, though there are many Dodoistu poems that also look at nature and beauty.

 It has 26 syllables: 7 in the first, second and third lines, and 5 in the last line. (7-7-7-5).



Example Poem

'Tis Better…   (A Dodoistu)

All triumphs end differently,
some with flourish and refrains,
some with frequent curtain calls,
others fade to black.

© Lawrencealot - Oct. 19, 2012


Visual Template

Wednesday, February 6, 2013

Naani


Naani is one of Indian's most popular Telugu poems. Naani means an expression of one and all. It consists of 4 lines, the total lines consists of 20 to 25 syllables. The poem is not bounded to a particular subject. Generally it depends upon human relations and current statements. This poetry was introduced by one of the renowned Telugu poets Dr. N.Gopi, presently working as vice-chancellor to Telugu University, Andhra Pradesh.
Example #1:
A dialogue
When lengthens
Remain questions
Without answer as criticism.

Copyright © 2001 Bollimuntha venkata Ramana Rao

Example # 2

Should I Critique Only Perfect Poems

Sometimes criticism bites
other times it sucks
choosing honesty over fluff
may cost you friends.

 © Lawrencealot - June 15, 2012



Thursday, January 17, 2013

Rannaigheacht bheag (ran-á-yah voig)


A traditional Irish quatrain of 7-syllable lines ('old-school'),
 or 8-6-8-6, ending in 2-syllable words all linked by consonance 
(in its old meaning, 'having the same vowels'),
 with at least two cross-rimes in each couplet
 (can be consonance in first but should be rime in second) 
and alliteration in every line, which in the second couplet
 must be between the last two stressed words in each line, 
and with the dunedh, of course (ending in the same word, phrase,
 or line it began with).


Poem Example

Ron-a'yach Rhyme

Writing rhyming words, giving
living lines, fit for fighting
biting boredom while living
in style with witty writing.

 (c) Lawrencealot - May 16,2012


Visual Template

As with the other Irish forms, a template can show you the syllable count and a bit more, but cannot be definitive as so much variation
is possible while meeting the formal  requirements.
In the example below some words not hi-lighted could have been as serving one or more rules.


Rannaigheacht mhor (ron-á-yach voor)


Rannaigheacht mhor (ron-á-yach voor, the ‘great versification’) is an ancient Irish quatrain using 7-syllable lines with 1-syllable end-words rimed ababa-rime can be assonance, but b-rime must be rime, here meaning perfect ‘correspondence’ or Comharda, in which consonants of the same class (p-t-k, m-n-ng etc.) are interchangeable—plus alliteration in every line—preferably between end-word and preceding stressed word (always thus in each quatrain’s closing couplet)—with at least two cross-rimes per couplet (assonance okay in leading couplets), one being L3’s end-word rimed within L4.  Being Irish, it requires the dunedh(first word, phrase, or line repeated in closing).  Each quatrain, as well as each leading couplet, must be able to stand on its own.  Modern specs for this form are given here:

Example Poem

Great Versifiers

Men sometimes are dreamers, lost,
lust-driven schemers who, when
hunting, deceive.  With trust  tossed
at great cost; none believe men.

(c) Lawrencealot - May 16, 2012


No template can be more than a rough guide, but here one is: