Sestina - Swinburne's Double

Swinburne's Double Sestina

Type:	Structure, Metrical Requirement, End Word Requirement, Isosyllabic
Description:	Algernon Charles Swinburne developed the double sestina, a twelve-line, twelve stanza form with a six line envoi for the masochistic poet.
Impressions:	Not for the faint of heart or taciturn soul.
Attributed to:	Algernon Charles Swinburne
Origin:	English
Schematic:	stanza 1: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 stanza 2: 12 1 9 11 4 7 2 8 3 10 6 5 stanza 3: 5 12 6 4 7 1 2 3 10 9 11 8 stanza 4: 8 5 7 6 4 12 10 2 3 11 1 9 stanza 5: 9 8 6 10 1 2 7 4 3 12 5 11 stanza 6: 11 9 6 10 4 2 7 1 12 8 5 3 stanza 7: 3 11 7 8 12 1 2 10 5 6 9 4 stanza 8: 4 3 9 6 5 10 1 7 12 11 8 2 stanza 9: 2 4 5 1 3 8 7 10 9 11 12 6 stanza 10: 6 2 9 3 8 1 7 5 10 4 11 12 stanza 11: 12 6 8 4 3 5 9 10 2 1 11 7 stanza 12: 7 12 6 3 9 11 5 8 4 2 10 1 envoy: 12 10/8 9/7 4/3 6/2 1/11 5
Rhythm/Stanza Length:	12
Line/Poem Length:	150
Status:	Incomplete

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 A special thanks to Charles L. Weatherford for his work on this site which is always a dependable resouce.

The Double Sestina

This cannot, in all honesty, be recommended... it's similar to a sestina, but has twelve keywords, twelve 12-line stanzas, and a 6-line tornada, making 150 lines in all. The only example I have been able to find is, heaven help us, a rhymed double sestina, by Swinburne. The keywords are: breath, her, way, death, sunflower, sun, day, bed, thee, dead, done, me (which gives you a fair idea of the flavour of the thing); so the rhyming pairs are (1,4) (2,5) (3,7) (6,11) (8,10) (9,12).  The structure is:

stanza 1: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12

stanza 2: 12 1 9 11 4 7 2 8 3 10 6 5

stanza 3: 5 12 6 4 7 1 2 3 10 9 11 8

stanza 4: 8 5 7 6 4 12 10 2 3 11 1 9

stanza 5: 9 8 6 10 1 2 7 4 3 12 5 11

stanza 6: 11 9 6 10 4 2 7 1 12 8 5 3

stanza 7: 3 11 7 8 12 1 2 10 5 6 9 4

stanza 8: 4 3 9 6 5 10 1 7 12 11 8 2

stanza 9: 2 4 5 1 3 8 7 10 9 11 12 6

stanza 10: 6 2 9 3 8 1 7 5 10 4 11 12

stanza 11: 12 6 8 4 3 5 9 10 2 1 11 7

stanza 12: 7 12 6 3 9 11 5 8 4 2 10 1

tornada: 12 10/8 9/7 4/3 6/2 1/11 5

You may think you want to write one of these, but you really don't, believe me. And if you should get it into your head that you want to write an unrhymed double sestina, you're going to have to work out the structure for yourself.

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It is with great thanks I applaud Bob Newman's efforts on his site, and his advice in the instance.  I believe I shall pass on an attempt to write on of this this month.

The Complaint of Lisa

There is no woman living who draws breath

So sad as I, though all things sadden her.

There is not one upon life's weariest way

Who is weary as I am weary of all but death.

Toward whom I look as looks the sunflower

All day with all his whole soul toward the sun;

While in the sun's sight I make moan all day,

And all night on my sleepless maiden bed.

Weep and call out on death, O Love, and thee,

That thou or he would take me to the dead.

And know not what thing evil I have done

That life should lay such heavy hand on me.

Alas! Love, what is this thou wouldst with me?

What honor shalt thou have to quench my breath,

Or what shall my heart broken profit thee?

O Love, O great god Love, what have I done,

That thou shouldst hunger so after my death?

My heart is harmless as my life's first day:

Seek out some false fair woman, and plague her

Till her tears even as my tears fill her bed:

I am the least flower in thy flowery way,

But till my time be come that I be dead,

Let me live out my flower-time in the sun,

Though my leaves shut before the sunflower.

O Love, Love, Love, the kingly sunflower!

Shall he the sun hath looked on look on me,

That live down here in shade, out of the sun,

Here living in the sorrow and shadow of death?

Shall he that feeds his heart full of the day

Care to give mine eyes light, or my lips breath?

Because she loves him, shall my lord love her

Who is as a worm in my lord's kingly way?

I shall not see him or know him alive or dead;

But thou, I know thee, O Love, and pray to thee

That in brief while my brief life-days be done,

And the worm quickly make my marriage-bed.

For underground there is no sleepless bed.

But here since I beheld my sunflower

These eyes have slept not, seeing all night and day

His sunlike eyes, and face fronting the sun.

Wherefore, if anywhere be any death,

I fain would find and fold him fast to me,

That I may sleep with the world's eldest dead,

With her that died seven centuries since, and her

That went last night down the night-wandering way.

For this is sleep indeed, when labor is done,

Without love, without dreams, and without breath,

And without thought, O name unnamed! of thee.

Ah! but, forgetting all things, shall I thee?

Wilt thou not be as now about my bed

There underground as here before the sun?

Shall not thy vision vex me alive and dead,

Thy moving vision without form or breath?

I read long since the bitter tale of her

Who read the tale of Launcelot on a day,

And died, and had no quiet after death,

But was moved ever along a weary way,

Lost with her love in the underworld; ah me,

O my king, O my lordly sunflower,

Would God to me, too, such a thing were done!

But if such sweet and bitter things be done,

Then, flying from life, I shall not fly from thee.

For in that living world without a sun

Thy vision will lay hold upon me dead,

And meet and mock me, and mar my peace in death.

Yet if being wroth, God had such pity on her,

Who was a sinner and foolish in her day,

That even in hell they twain should breathe one breath,

Why should he not in some wise pity me?

So if I sleep not in my soft strait bed,

I may look up and see my sunflower

As he the sun, in some divine strange way.

O poor my heart, well knowest thou in what way

This sore sweet evil unto us was done.

For on a holy and a heavy day

I was arisen out of my still small bed

To see the knights tilt, and one said to me

"The king;" and seeing him, somewhat stopped my breath;

And if the girl spake more, I heard her not,

For only I saw what I shall see when dead,

A kingly flower of knights, a sunflower,

That shone against the sunlight like the sun,

And like a fire, O heart, consuming thee,

The fire of love that lights the pyre of death.

Howbeit I shall not die an evil death

Who have loved in such a sad and sinless way,

That this my love, lord, was no shame to thee.

So when mine eyes are shut against the sun,

O my soul's sun, O the world's sunflower,

Thou nor no man will quite despise me dead.

And dying I pray with all my low last breath

That thy whole life may be as was that day,

That feast-day that made trothplight death and me,

Giving the world light of thy great deeds done;

And that fair face brightening thy bridal bed,

That God be good as God hath been to her.

That all things goodly and glad remain with her,

All things that make glad life and goodly death;

That as a bee sucks from a sunflower

Honey, when summer draws delighted breath,

Her soul may drink of thy soul in like way,

And love make life a fruitful marriage-bed

Where day may bring forth fruits of joy to day

And night to night till days and nights be dead.

And as she gives light of her love to thee,

Give thou to her the old glory of days long done;

And either give some heat of light to me,

To warm me where I sleep without the sun.

O sunflower make drunken with the sun,

O knight whose lady's heart draws thine to her,

Great king, glad lover, I have a word to thee.

There is a weed lives out of the sun's way,

Hid from the heat deep in the meadow's bed,

That swoons and whitens at the wind's least breath,

A flower star-shaped, that all a summer day

Will gaze her soul out on the sunflower

For very love till twilight finds her dead.

But the great sunflower heeds not her poor death,

Knows not when all her loving life is done;

And so much knows my lord the king of me.

Ay, all day long he has no eye for me;

With golden eye following the golden sun

From rose-colored to purple-pillowed bed,

From birthplace to the flame-lit place of death,

From eastern end to western of his way,

So mine eye follows thee, my sunflower,

So the white star-flower turns and yearns to thee,

The sick weak weed, not well alive or dead,

Trod under foot if any pass by her,

Pale, without color of summer or summer breath

In the shrunk shuddering petals, that have done

No work but love, and die before the day.

But thou, to-day, to-morrow, and every day,

Be glad and great, O love whose love slays me.

Thy fervent flower made fruitful from the sun

Shall drop its golden seed in the world's way,

That all men thereof nourished shall praise thee

For grain and flower and fruit of works well done;

Till thy shed seed, O shining sunflower,

Bring forth such growth of the world's garden-bed

As like the sun shall outlive age and death.

And yet I would thine heart had heed of her

Who loves thee alive; but not till she be dead.

Come, Love, then, quickly, and take her utmost breath.

Song, speak for me who am dumb as are the dead;

From my sad bed of tears I send forth thee,

To fly all day from sun's birth to sun's death

Down the sun's way after the flying sun,

For love of her that gave thee wings and breath

Ere day be done, to seek the sunflower.

Algernon Charles Swinburne