- The Kimo is an Israeli version of the haiku, found at Poetry Kaleidoscope.
- There should
be no movement in the imagery.
The Kimo is: - a tristich, a 3 line poem.
- syllabic 10-7-6 syllables per line.
- unrhymed.
- My Dog
Angel by Judi Van
Gorder
Coffee grounds and egg shells on kitchen floor
next to overturned trash pail,
Angel sleeping nearby.
Thanks to Judi Van Gorder for all her work on the PMO resource.
Related Forms: Alphabet Haiku, Crystalline, Haibun, Haiga, Haiku, Haikuette, Kimo, Lune, Pixiku, Rhaiku, Sijo, Ukiah, Zip
Related Forms: Alphabet Haiku, Crystalline, Haibun, Haiga, Haiku, Haikuette, Kimo, Lune, Pixiku, Rhaiku, Sijo, Ukiah, Zip
My attempt
"The
Yard's Done" (Kimo)
Backyard
neat with no unraked leaves in sight
rake
leaning against tree trunk.
No
tracks in fresh snowfall.
©
Lawrencealot - December 3, 2013
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