Bina
Type:
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Structure, Metrical Requirement, End Word
Requirement, Isosyllabic
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Description:
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Bob Newman has taken the general idea of the sestina
and extended it both upwards and downwards from the six-line stanza it
normally uses. The Bina is the two-line stanza version. Like the sestina, it
is preferable to use isosyllabic lines.
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Attributed to:
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Bob Newman
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Origin:
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England
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Schematic:
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End word repetition pattern:
12 21
Envoy: (12)
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Strengths:
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It is much shorter and more practical that the
sestina.
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Weaknesses:
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Having shorter stanzas, the end words come back very
quickly, so while it isn't as repetitive and possibly monotonous as the
sestina, they will be a very strong presence in the poem. This could make the
poem somewhat comic, intentionally or not.
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Starting Point:
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Because it is only five lines, the flexibility of
the end words is not nearly as important as in the sestina; however, they
should be chosen well enough that they can be used three times each in five
lines and not grate on the nerves.
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Rhythm/Stanza Length:
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2
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Line/Poem Length:
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5
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Status:
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Complete
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Pasted
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Bina
An even smaller variation with just 2 keywords and 5
lines is possible; we may as well call this the bina, then we can
have:
Wry Bina
When young Michelle was thirsty,
she would long
For “that blackcurrant drink - is any left?”
I wonder, now that she’s grown up and left,
If maybe I indulged her for too long.
When in the tooth she’s long, she’ll have none left.
For “that blackcurrant drink - is any left?”
I wonder, now that she’s grown up and left,
If maybe I indulged her for too long.
When in the tooth she’s long, she’ll have none left.
A big thank you to Bob Newman
My Example
Trained Wives (Bina)
The earning of money
has been up to me,
the spending of it's
been up to my wives.
I've tried adjusting
by taking new wives
but they've all done
their jobs better than me.
The question for me
is who trains those wives?
© Lawrencealot -
December 26, 2013
Related forms: Bina, Tritina, Quartina, Quintina, Sestina, Newman Sestina, Sidney's Double Sestina, Decrina, and Canzone.
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