Trilinea

• The Trilinea, one more haiku copycat from Berg's Pathways for a Poet, created by Nellie Amos. It seems a bit superficial to me since the defining feature is the word "rose" must appear somewhere in the 3 lines.
  
  The Trilinea is:
• a tristich, a poem in 3 lines.
• syllabic, with syllable count per line, 4-8-4.
• rhymed, L1 and L3 rhyme.
• composed to include the word "rose".
• titled.
  
  tattoo by Judi Van Gorder
  
  teardrops of dew
  cling to a red velvet rose
  the touch of you

Pasted from <http://www.poetrymagnumopus.com/index.php?showtopic=1188>

Thanks to Judi  Van Gorder, who has done a marvelous job with PMO.  I agree with her feeling about this form.

My Example

Hardly Matters

I rose to say

something;  what is was I forgot

but that's okay.

(c) Lawrencealot - December 8,2013