Sheshire
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Type: | 
Structure, Metrical Requirement, Rhyme Scheme
  Requirement, Isosyllabic, Pivot Requirement | 
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Description: | 
A poem based on six-line verses with a closing
  couplet. Here are Chuck’s rules: 
 
The derivation is from the Hebrew words shesh and
  shir or shira meaning six poem. | 
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Attributed to: | 
Charles David Lipsig | 
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Origin: | 
American (Jewish) | 
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Schematic: | 
Rhyme: ababab or abcabc 
Total schema: 
ababab cdcdcd efefef gg or 
abcabc defdef ghighi jj | 
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Rhythm/Stanza Length: | 
6 | 
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Line/Poem Length: | 
20 | 
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Examples: | |
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Status: | 
Incomplete | 
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See Also: | 
Pasted from <http://www.poetrybase.info/forms/002/253.shtml>
My thanks to Charles L. Weatherford for the wonderful resource quoted. 
- The Sheshire is an invented
     verse form by Jewish-American poet Charles David Lipsig found at Poetry
     BaseThe name comes from Hebrew six=shesh and
     poem=shir.
 
 The Sheshire is:
- a poem of 20 lines made up of 3 sixains followed by a couplet.
- isosyllabic except the last line which includes the the # of syllables as the previous lines plus a finishing phrase separated from the base line by caesura.
- rhymed, rhyme scheme ababab cdcdcd efefef gg or abcabc defdef ghighi jj.
- composed with a pivot or change of tone from stanza to stanza and ends with a note of irony.
 My thanks to Judi Van Gorder for the wonderful resource quoted. 
Example
Poem
Shovel
Snow     (Sheshire)
When
I was only nine or ten 
and
winter's chilly nights dumped snow, 
I
loved to help my daddy then 
We'd
bundle up, he'd say, "Let's go!" 
Together,
we two working men 
would
scrape and push and scoop and throw. 
Into
my teens I found it paid 
to
take my shovel- make the rounds 
to
work for those who were dismayed 
how
quickly that white stuff abounds. 
While
others in their warm homes stayed 
I
worked with scraping, grunting sounds. 
I
had no sons to share the task. 
Our
drive was shaded by our house; 
"Please
clean the walk," my wife would ask. 
Of
course one ought to please one's spouse
so
covered up, and with ski-mask 
I
worked. It did no good to grouse. 
Retired
and lazy now I nap 
or
read or watch my football game.  (Let
teens now do that crap!)
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Lawrencealot - February 2, 2014
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