This form was
brought to our attention by Streambed of Allpoety
with this comment
introducing a contest:
I don't know what
Byron would have called this form, but I think of it as "Ruffled
Couplets" because it's pretty much couplets shaken up by an unexpected
line. It's so easy to use. It's based on Byron's one stanza poem
"Remembrance." The meter in the original poem wigged me out a little,
and I had to step back and just think of typical 8 syllable lines before I
could use it. I'll post the original here, but if you find the meter
frustrating to work around I'm also posting a link to mine below which uses a
typical meter.
Remembrance by Lord
Byron
’Tis done!—I saw it
in my dreams;
No more with Hope
the future beams;
My days of happiness
are few:
Chill’d by
misfortune’s wintry blast,
My dawn of life is
overcast;
Love Hope, and Joy,
alike adieu!
Would I could add
Remembrance too!
I have created a
visual template of this poem below,
indicating a sestet
of iambic tetrameter
with rhyme pattern aabccbb.
I chose to name this
form Byron's Septet for easy
identification
Visual Template
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