The
pantoum consists of a series of quatrains rhyming abab in which the second and fourth lines of a quatrain recur
as the first and third lines in the succeeding quatrain;
each
quatrain introduces a new second rhyme as bcbc,
cdcd.
The
first line of the series recurs as the last line of the closing quatrain,
and third line of the poem recurs as the second line of the closing
quatrain, rhyming zaza.
The
design is simple:
Line
1
Line
2
Line
3
Line
4
Line
5 (repeat of line 2)
Line
6
Line
7 (repeat of line 4)
Line
8
Continue
with as many stanzas as you wish, but the ending
stanza
then repeats the second and fourth lines of the
previous
stanza (as its first and third lines), and also
repeats
the third line of the first stanza, as its second
line,
and the first line of the first stanza as its fourth.
So
the first line of the poem is also the last.
Last
stanza:
Line
2 of previous stanza
Line
3 of first stanza
Line
4 of previous stanza
Line
1 of first stanza
NOTE: I found to meter specified for this form but on Shadow
Poetry found examples from Iambic Trimeter to Pentameter
Example Poem
Then She Married Me
I met her online,
whatcha think of that?
In writing workshop
I critiqued her work.
Then we played
sensual games by chat.
Cutting out by
need... the hotel desk clerk.
In writing workshop
I critiqued her work.
Her stories aroused
a man unfulfilled.
Cutting out by
need... the hotel desk clerk.
Our minds connected;
our Eros was thrilled.
Her stories
aroused a man unfulfilled.
We climbed with
words into each other's head.
Our minds connected;
our Eros was thrilled.
This late-night
texting led me to her bed.
We climbed with
words into each other's head.
Then we played
sensual games by chat.
This late-night
texting led me to her bed.
I met her online,
whatcha think of that?
(c) Lawrencealot
April 2012
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