This is a poetry
form invented in 2008 by Gregory James, writing on Allpoetry.com as
Psydewaystears
The poem is
Stanzaic, consisting of three or more octets.
Syllable:
8/7/8/7/7/7/7/7
Rhyme: ababxcxc
Refrain: Lines 5 through 7, first four syllables
The Refrain is
required for the majority of the stanzas.
Meter: long lines generally:
Anapest,Iamb,Anapest (da da DUM da DUM
da da DUM)
Other lines:
Anapest,Iamb,Iamb (da da DUM da
DUM da DUM)
Note: These
specifications were derived and interpreted by myself, and the meter
particularly is not hard and fast, but serves only as the normal guideline.
Example Poem
Take Bites (Gregory's Refrain)
When the task you
have before you
seems too large for
just one man
just remember
there's one more view
to describe your
total plan.
Do a little bit
right now
Do a little more
today
Save a little for
tomorrow
it's more doable
that way.
When your tea's much
too hot to drink
you don't throw it
all away,
you just wait a
while I would think.
come back later,
it's okay.
While you're waiting
check your mail,
While you're waiting
make a call,
While you're waiting
tidy up.
Oh, that tea--
you've drunk it all.
When the trellis
stands starkly bare
though it wants to
be embraced
it just waits, and
does not despair.
and soon vines will
kiss its face.
The vine pushes
through the earth.
The vine pushes up
the wall,
The vine pushes
every day,
up the trellis proud
and tall.
While the Mona Lisa
looks fit,
I hear Leonardo
deigned
it unfinished, he
never quit
in the doing much
was gained.
Just do part of what
you figure
is the task ahead of
you
even though you
never finish
when you're done the
job is through.
© Lawrencealot -
August 28, 2013
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