Earliest
strata of British Celtic poetry #1: cyrch gymeriad (wreathing).
Information
provided by Gary Kent Spain.
In
Welsh, cymeriad (‘memory’)
refers to repetition of the same word or syllable, often at the start of
successive lines. Cyrch gymeriad means
what we call ‘wreathing’, that is, to repeat the word or syllable ending
one line (or line segment) at or near the start of the next (see
below). It can involve meaning as well, that is, synonyms.
Your
prompt is to assemble short (roughly two-stress) line segments of 3-6 syllables
(mostly 3-4 if possible) into at least two longer lines (printed as stanzas)
that rime on the last syllable (stressed or not), and to link each line segment
with its neighbors by one (or more) of the following techniques:
1. Cymeriad (beginning with the same word or
syllable, or a homophone or synonym)
2. Cyrch gymeriad (word or syllable
repetition linking end of one with start of next)
3.
Alliteration, or consonance (repetition of two or more sounds of a
word, can both be consonant sounds or one can be a vowel sound)
4.
Rimed syllable, which even should it occur at the ends of two successive line
segments still constitutes ‘internal’ rime, since more than one make up the
complete ‘line’ (i.e. stanza)
...again,
the cymeriad may involve
homophones (different words that sound the same) or synonyms, in addition to
actual repetition.
Schematic, where each letter represents a syllable, x = unlinked,
lower case (abc etc.) rimed, upper case (ABC etc.) repeated (cymeriad)—spaces
separate words, bold and italics (alternating)
indicate alliteration, and underlinedindicates a proper
name.
x A-B
/ B A-c
xxx C / C DD
DD
EE / EE xf
G-GG f /
G-GG H
H
xx / f x xH
x x-xx / x-x-x-h
x xxi / x x i / x-x h
Example
Poem
Abalone
abound
bound
below to rocks;
rocked
not by salty waves
but
safety waived by men.
Men-
selfish divers
"shell-fish
dinners" served as
dining
divers' can.
Bountiful
before man
manufactured-
gear
that
fractured, broke the ban
banning
air- breathing man.
Man
equipped to submerge
then
eclipsed by base urge-
Urgent
need for meals
of
otters, and seals.
Tasting
abalone,
Shellfish
about alone
in
taste, attests to why-
Why
we've failed fishing ban.
©
Lawrencealot - July 13, 2013
I have
provided a Visual Template below that
shows my attempt at various linkages.
Unfortunately,
I could not make this schematic fit the example poem provide, and pretty much
believe it is UNREALISITIC to assume a template can be constructed since almost
everything is optional, from line-length to type of linkage.
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