- The Balance attempts to create
     an ebb and flow rhythm. The rhythm is created by a specific syllabic
     designation per line as well as an intricate rhyme scheme. This verse form
     was created by Viola Berg.
 
 The Balance is:
- stanzaic, framed in 4 cinquains. The patterns of the cinquains change from stanza to stanza.
- syllabic,
 stanza 1 =10-8-6-4-2 syllables.
 stanza 2 =2-4-6-8-10 syllables
 stanza 3 =10-8-6-4-2 syllables
 stanza 4 = 2-4-6-8-10 syllables
- rhymed, rhyme scheme Abcde edcba abcde edcbA.
- composed with a refrain, the 1st line of the poem is repeated as
      the last line.
 Short Balance by Judi Van Gorder
 
 Centered on the page the words resonate
 with sounds of fingers striking
 the computer keyboard.
 Tapping into
 my muse.
 
 Good news,
 the verse in due
 time takes shape, strikes a chord
 without inspiration spiking.
 Centered on the page the words resonate.
Related forms: Baxter's Hexastitch, Butterfly Cinquain, Cinquetun, Cinquino, Crapsey Cinquain, CinqCinquain, Cinquain Chain, Cinquain Swirl,  Didactic Cinquain, Mirror Cinquain, Oddquain Butterfly, Standard Cinquain, The Balance 
My
Thanks to Judi Van Gorder for the wonderful resource at PMO
My
Sample Poem
Fish
wrap is Functional    (The Balance)
The
paper tells of babies being born, 
while
businesses are formed and fold, 
and
folks grow old and die, 
while
other's kill 
or
cheat 
to
beat 
other's
for thrill 
or
just because they're high. 
The
earth's getting too hot or cold; 
associations
steer and hold in scorn 
those
men who break from ranks and won't adorn 
concepts
as right, because they're old. 
Opinions
satisfy,
candidates
will 
just
tweet 
or
greet 
with
smarmy skill 
while
business goes awry 
and
we the sheeple, are controlled. 
The
paper tells of babies being born. 
©
Lawrencealot - March 7, 2014

 
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