This form was created by Allpoetry's D.D. Michaels ,
aka midnightblue
A
poetry form consisting of 3 or more Octets,
with the
8 lines of each Octet having the following syllable count:
8/8/8/6/8/8/8/6,
that is to say Iambic Tetrameter in lines 1/2/3/ and 5/6/7,
and
Iambic Trimeter in lines 4 and 8.
The
rhyme scheme is as follows: a/a/(bb)/c, d/d/(ee)/c.
That
means that in the Quatrain of the Octet, lines 1 and 2 rhyme,
in line
3 there is an internal with the end-word,
and line
4 rhymes with line 8 in the following Quatrain of the Octet.
Example Poem
Ode to the
Quaintrelles
The Dandizettes
pre-dated me.
But, I applaud them
they seemed free.
It almost seems they
lived their dreams
They stressed by
dress, their charms.
In finery these
Danizettes
May frequently have
been coquettes
They liked to play
and found their way
to weathy fellows'
arms.
At first some
thought them fancy whores,
Bedecked and primed
for nighttime chores
and they were
spurned, yet they soon earned
respect for charm
and grace.
From Europe came
their finest clothes
to showcase
first; their standing rose.
Each girl would show
the cultural glow,
with happy smiling
face.
Equivalent today
subsumed
by Hollywood
pretense consumed
by any twit though
lacking wit
who wants to look
the part.
Quaintelles did more
than copy styles.
they flaunted them
and with their smiles
said okay guys, we
are the prize.
They did it with
their heart.
© Lawrencealot -
April 30, 2012
Author's Notes
A quaintrelle is a woman who emphasizes a life of passion
expressed through personal style, leisurely pastimes, charm, and cultivation of
life’s pleasures. Quaintrelles share the philosophical underpinnings of dandies, developed within feminine nature and styles. They were also called dandizettes.
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